With the hue and cry,
all emotions all dry.
The silence of nights,
all ruin up in pang and toils.
Carbon is all what we need,
some in form of diamond,
and some in graphite,
Graphite is elite.
The day is full of sunlight,
a man walking on the river side
is somewhat like me
all surrounded by water and exile.
I love rain, I love the emotions thy,
all surrounded by the salty water coming out of my eye.
I miss my life, my world, my sky.
T0 hail emotions is just a crime.
Sue a case against me
for loving you whole day and night,
with some deeds in my soul
for all life without any guilt and shame.
All I can do is to write,
can’t get you the surprises of life,
even though my love for you is never a defile.
The profanity is even in a dead soil,
the emotions all ready to devastate
my soul and my heart together
to make me a man of dead thoughts
and a shameless antisocial insane.


Posted by payal on February 16, 2008 at 1:49 pm
very gud thought….n very well said……….
Posted by Zed on February 16, 2008 at 5:47 pm
behtareennnnnn
I love this lines
“I love rain, I love the emotions thy,
all surrounded by the salty water coming out of my eye. ”
beautifully co-related rain and tears.
Posted by my inner world on February 23, 2008 at 3:27 pm
hi:) very nice one!!!
Posted by Reety on September 8, 2009 at 3:04 pm
Sue a case against me for loving yu whole day and night…..!!
nice depiction of yur deep true love fr yur girl…..
god bless yu both…..